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Travis
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Poetry
« Thread started on: Jan 14th, 2005, 11:38am » |
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Ayla
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #1 on: Jan 16th, 2005, 11:24pm » |
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Oooo here's one, (Travis you already have this one) -
Crystal
Be careful with me
For I am made of crystal
For in your hands
I shall fall
Be careful when I drop
My fragile thoughts are all in vain
My mind shall pop
And disappear away
Be careful for my glass is sharp
I’ll cut away your soul
And break your heart
Like thin harp strings
Crystal shards
Embedded in the floor
That is where my thoughts shall stay
Until the day I am saved.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #2 on: Jan 17th, 2005, 6:44pm » |
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Rate This Poem 1-10 
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #3 on: Jan 21st, 2005, 9:45pm » |
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yesh yesh plz .x.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #4 on: Feb 7th, 2005, 9:34pm » |
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Silent Laughter
Filling the air
It feels horrible
When no body cares
Hot tears
And trembling lips
My hands reach out
Wishing for someone to come
And pull me out
Again one of mine. rate please
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #5 on: Feb 7th, 2005, 9:36pm » |
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Black Dragon
written by XxXxDepressed_LonerxXxX
01:22 AM 2/8/05
Dragons of Black and charchoal wings
Has a breath of Death, they're evil things
At sunset they arouse and then soon take up flight
flying throughout the darkest night
Seeing their wounderous bodies soar through the skies
Searching for a kill with their blood red eyes
You better hope the Dragon has eaten
He'll fight to the death until you are beaten
When daylight breaks he'll fly home to his den
But beware for nightfall shall come again
This one is by some random guy. Rate
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #6 on: Feb 11th, 2005, 02:18am » |
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blind
I feel it fall around me
life stagnent still
you can't help what your eyes don't see
but silently I'm bleeding
from the wounds you unknowingly instilled
I'd hate you if you'd let me
but even that I am denied
I'd call myself your fallen angel
but to that to you'd disagree
so I lay her bleeding
seeping out all these feelings
you just couldn't see
sorry for the crappy spelling.
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Re: Poetry
« Reply #7 on: Feb 17th, 2005, 7:05pm » |
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thats good adreil- 9, good emotion
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